I played through the demo and it was pretty good! (It's a pretty lengthy demo!)The artwork for the backgrounds and characters is great. The characters are pretty likable so far (<3 Shiori) and I'm looking forward to seeing where the story leads and how these characters develop.
The writing has a good balance between serious/emotional moments and humorous moments. I thought some of the writing was a bit overdramatic at first, but I was glad that the humor helped keep it in check. I was even a bit surprised the main character had some self-awareness at the beginning to help me get over that feeling I had. After I thought about it, I came to think, "Yeah, I guess that's probably how someone would think or feel in that situation" and got over that feeling of it being overdramatic.
I made a video with my commentary and experiences. Keep up the great work and good luck with development!
Hey! Thank you so much for you response, I'm super happy you like the demo so far and I've watched parts of your video. Super interesting/weird to see the responses to say the least! If you're following the character artist, he'll keep you posted on when the Kickstarter will launch, it will be soon!
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I played through the demo and it was pretty good! (It's a pretty lengthy demo!)The artwork for the backgrounds and characters is great. The characters are pretty likable so far (<3 Shiori) and I'm looking forward to seeing where the story leads and how these characters develop.
The writing has a good balance between serious/emotional moments and humorous moments. I thought some of the writing was a bit overdramatic at first, but I was glad that the humor helped keep it in check. I was even a bit surprised the main character had some self-awareness at the beginning to help me get over that feeling I had. After I thought about it, I came to think, "Yeah, I guess that's probably how someone would think or feel in that situation" and got over that feeling of it being overdramatic.
I made a video with my commentary and experiences. Keep up the great work and good luck with development!
Hey! Thank you so much for you response, I'm super happy you like the demo so far and I've watched parts of your video. Super interesting/weird to see the responses to say the least! If you're following the character artist, he'll keep you posted on when the Kickstarter will launch, it will be soon!